Question

近期，霧霾天氣頻頻發(fā)生，PM2.5（可入肺顆粒物）與PM10（可吸入顆料物）這兩個(gè)此前不被人熟知的詞最近一直被許多人提及，環(huán)境保護(hù)越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注。作為一名青少年，我們?nèi)绾伪M可能自己的微薄之力來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境，請(qǐng)以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義發(fā)出一個(gè)倡議。

要點(diǎn)；

1、環(huán)保受到人們更多的關(guān)注；

2、環(huán)境的現(xiàn)狀；

3、應(yīng)采取的措施。

提示：霧霾天氣：Dust-haze weather

注意：詞數(shù)120詞左右（格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

My fellow students,

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                           

The Students’Union

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version:

Recently , the Dust-haze weather hit the north of China over and over again, which had a great effect on people’s life and health. As a result, people are becoming more and more concerned about our environment. As we all know, it’s the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution. So as a teenager, I think we should take some measures to protect our environment.

On one hand, we’d better launch a campaign to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Also we can hold a speech contest about protecting environment to stress the importance of living a low- carbon life. On the other hand, do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. As far as I’m concerned, every small step we take really counts. So please remember: together, individuals can make a difference.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。近期，霧霾天氣頻頻發(fā)生，PM2.5（可入肺顆粒物）與PM10（可吸入顆料物）這兩個(gè)此前不被人熟知的詞最近一直被許多人提及，環(huán)境保護(hù)越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注。作為一名青少年，我們?nèi)绾伪M可能自己的微薄之力來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境，請(qǐng)以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義發(fā)出一個(gè)倡議。可知這是一篇倡議書(shū)，且需要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容提綱已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求詞數(shù)120詞左右，寫(xiě)的字?jǐn)?shù)不要太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。