Question

書面表達(dá)（25分）

當(dāng)前，“酒后駕車”（drinking and driving）成了人們熱議的話題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示對(duì)“酒后駕車”談?wù)剛�(gè)人看法：

1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發(fā)交通事故，造成交通阻塞，構(gòu)成生命危險(xiǎn)，

造成財(cái)產(chǎn)損失等。

2．你的建議。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；   2．開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Possible version:

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.

I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drinking and driving can be things of past.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。當(dāng)前，“酒后駕車”（drinking and driving）成了人們熱議的話題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示對(duì)“酒后駕車”談?wù)剛�(gè)人看法：1．“酒后駕車”的危害。如：引發(fā)交通事故，造成交通阻塞，構(gòu)成生命危險(xiǎn)，造成財(cái)產(chǎn)損失等。

2．你的建議。可知需要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求100字左右，寫的字?jǐn)?shù)不要太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。