Question

許多歐洲國家將9月22日設為“無車日”。請結合我國目前的現(xiàn)狀，如交通堵塞、環(huán)境

污染、車禍頻發(fā)等，寫一篇100—120詞的英語短文，說明自己對“無車日”的認識。

注意：1．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．生詞：無車日—No Cars Day/ No-car Day

As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems.                                                   

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we know, with the development of economy, the number of cars is increasing very rapidly, thus causing some social problems. For example, people are often caught in a traffic jam, especially at rush hour and car accidents have occurred more often than ever. What’s more, the car is one of the major problems resulting in global warming. So I think it’s a good idea for many European countries to set September 22nd as “No Cars Day”.

Although a one-day campaign can hardly generate enough long-term influence to change people’s behaviour, at least, it can remind people of the harm that cars do to our society, and encourage more people to travel by bicycle or public transport. In my view, it’s not the day but the awareness of all the people to help solve social problems that really matters.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文的寫作。本文的話題是無煙日，需要考生具體從交通堵塞、環(huán)境污染、車禍頻發(fā)三個方面展開，最后說明自己支持無煙日的活動。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：考查開放性作文的寫作。

點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。