Question

前不久，中央電視臺(tái)記者奔赴全國各地以“什么是幸福？”為主題進(jìn)行隨機(jī)采訪，采訪對(duì)象的回答各種各樣，不盡相同。作為一位高三的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的提示，以What is Happiness 為題，寫一篇英語短文。

提示:

1. 不同的人對(duì)“什么是幸福？”的回答各不相同。

2. 你認(rèn)為追求自己人生目標(biāo)的過程就是一種幸福。

3. 因?yàn)樾腋�來自于樂觀的態(tài)度，努力后的成就和簡樸健康的生活。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)120左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）

2. 不要逐句翻譯，圍繞以上提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫。

What is Happiness

Recently the reporters from CCTV have made a random interview with people in different areas across China on what is happiness.  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

What is Happiness

Recently the reporters from CCTV have made a random interview with people in different areas across China on what is happiness. Different people have different ideas.

Some people think happiness comes from being rich and famous while others say that being a good person leads to happiness. In my opinion, happiness results from the process of achieving your own goal.

Firstly, happiness is rooted in an optimistic attitude, with which we can face any problem in work and life. In this way happiness will never be far from us. Secondly, true happiness depends on hard work. When we achieve something after working hard at it, we will feel content, which is an important part of happiness. Last but not least, happiness comes from simplicity. Those who spend too much money to satisfy their desires will never feel happy. So living a simple but content and healthy life can make a person very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，話題為：“什么是幸福？”。不同的人對(duì)“幸�！钡睦斫獠灰粯�。從這個(gè)角度可以展開說明。要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。