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七、書面表達（共15分）
2010年4月14日，我國青海玉樹發(fā)生里氏7.1級地震，死傷慘重，玉樹人民家園被毀，很多人無家可歸。關(guān)于震后重建問題，我班同學(xué)展開了討論，有人認為提供幫助最重要，有人認為鼓勵自救須優(yōu)于一切，請寫一篇短文介紹同學(xué)的觀點，并發(fā)表自己的見解。
提供幫助：1.需要錢、物支援才能重建      2.受災(zāi)人民正受悲痛、傷病折磨中
鼓勵自救：1.重建家鄉(xiāng)，需要自己人的參與  2積極行動，投身重建，有利于忘記悲痛
我的觀點：……
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On April 14, 2014, a great earthquake measuring 7.1 on the Ritchter scale happened in Yushu, Qinghai Province, causing a lot of damage.                                    

Answer 1

One possible version：
On April 14, 2014, a great earthquake measuring 7.1 on the Ritchter scale happened in Yushu, Qinghai Province, causing a lot of damage。Recently our class have had a discussion on how to rebuild the quake –stricken area。
One group hold the view that the quake-stricken areas will benefit more from the help being offered 。as is known to all ，in the disaster some areas suffered great losses and were in need of money and materals 。in addition ，those alive are suffering great sorrow and pain, and then the help from the outside should play the leading role.
However, the other group argue that first we should encourage the poor people to act to help themselves. First, the local people ought to undertake the responsibility to rebuild their hometowns. And also their active participation in reconstruction will help them forget their sorrow and pain.
From my point of view, both of the two ways are necessary. As the saying goes,  “God helps those who help themselves”. With our assistance, the local people must be willing and able to devote themselves to the reconstruction work to create a better future.

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