Question

孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重。請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求： 1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容；

2. 分析漫畫所揭示的問題； 3. 提出你的看法。

注意：

1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、連貫；

3.詞數(shù)120左右;

4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯:pave the way

From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's

development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

【解析】這篇書面表達(dá)以漫畫的形式講述"以孩子為中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆"這一社會現(xiàn)象，發(fā)人深省。漫畫式作文就是通過漫畫提供的圖像信息寫一篇短文，漫畫作文就內(nèi)容而言，可以寫觀察到的內(nèi)容，也可以根據(jù)合理想象適當(dāng)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮來補(bǔ)充一些內(nèi)容；就表達(dá)方式而言，可以單純地理解、說明，也可以在說明中加以描寫、敘述。寫好漫畫作文的要求是：認(rèn)真審圖，確立主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，展開聯(lián)想或發(fā)表感想，變點(diǎn)為句，連句成篇。要達(dá)到這些要求，我們就必須認(rèn)真審圖，善于利用圖中人物間的關(guān)系、人物的對話、人物的活動及所處場所，以及圖（表）中的文字說明和標(biāo)識來提煉要點(diǎn)；要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。范文的亮點(diǎn)有：The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.這句話里面的while表示對比。還有It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents.這句話里面用了非謂語動詞，還有最后一句話Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.這句話用了倒裝句。

【考點(diǎn)定位】考查漫畫類作文。