Question

下面是光明中學(xué)的示意圖，請你根據(jù)示意圖和所給的附加信息，寫一篇介紹光明中學(xué)校園的短文。

1) 校園到處種有樹木和花草，校園環(huán)境優(yōu)美安靜;
2) 校園占地24000平方米;
3) 學(xué)校擁有近百年的歷史，現(xiàn)有學(xué)生5000人，教職工300人左右。
參考詞匯：教職工 teaching staff, 平方米 square meter
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, ________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Guangming High School is in the west of the city. When you enter the school gate, you can find the teaching building on your left and the gymnasium on your right. Walking on further, you can see a round building which is the library in the middle of the campus. The building on the northwest corner serves as the dining hall and the building opposite it on the northeast corner is the students’ dormitory.
The high school has a history of nearly 100 years. There are about 5000 students studying here and a teaching staff of about 300. The campus covers an area of 24000 square meters, with bushes and flowers surrounding every building, which provides a quiet and beautiful environment for the students.

試題分析：考查說明文。本文是介紹了光明中學(xué)具體情況，在校園的具體的建筑物的位置上要按照一定的順序來組織，使用具體的方位名詞來表示。故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評：動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。