Question

隨著電腦普及率的提高，老師、家長和學(xué)生對(duì)書寫的重視程度降低了。據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有85.8%的中學(xué)生說自己的書寫不好看，而他們又不想改善書寫，其理由有很大差別。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文，說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法。

可以用電腦寫字	51.5%
沒有時(shí)間練	32.3%
沒有什么用	10.9%
其他	5.3%

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students don't want to improve their handwriting.  51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.2 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.

As the saying goes, writing style shows the man.  Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.  Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。

考點(diǎn)：圖表類

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于圖表類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。