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China Daily現(xiàn)就“Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important”在讀者中展開(kāi)討論，假設(shè)你是王磊，你向報(bào)社投稿，請(qǐng)依據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)110左右，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

1．財(cái)富比健康重要，富人受人尊重，而窮人受人歧視。

2．健康勝于財(cái)富，健康的人才能享受生活。

3．你自己的看法。

Health and Wealth, Which Is More Important

Some people hold that wealth is more important than health．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Some people hold that wealth is more important than health. They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. Therefore, a person who tries all means to make money will be considered (to be) a hero no matter whether he is in good or poor health.

However ,the majority of people believe that health is more important than wealth . For example, a healthy scientist can achieve more success in his scientific research .Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.

In my opinion, health is more important than wealth .Good health can bring us success as well as real happiness . So ,health is the most important thing that one has to treasure in this world.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。而且我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。這就要求平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】They think that a wealthy person will be respected in this world, while a poor person will be looked down upon by others. 這句話里面有賓語(yǔ)從句，也能正確使用連詞while，還有Only if a person enjoys good health ,can he really enjoy his life.這是一個(gè)倒裝句

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)