Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Thanks very much for your story. The plot is very touched. Now listen to me carefully. It’s very funny. One day, a young man was going from house to house on the street so he wanted to introduce him to all his new neighbors. Outside one house, he stopped and saw a big dog sitting on the sidewalk. Well, he thought that it was belonged to the people in the house, but he paid no attention to it. He just pressed the bell, and the owners asked him in, and the dog went in, either. He greeted them with a smile and then he sat down, and a couple gave him a cup of coffee and some cookies. Well, the dog ate one of the cookies off the plate, and sat in his knee. The young man don’t want to seem rude, so he petted the dog gentle and continued talking to the couple. Anyway, gently when it was time to go, he thanked them and left. When the young man left, the woman called after him, “Excuse me, don’t forget to take your dog!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

1.Touched改成touching

2.so改成because

3.him改成himself

4.belonged改成belonging

5.b ut改成so

6.either改成too

7.a改成the

8.in改成on

9.Don’t改成didn’t

10.gentle改成gently

【解析】

試題分析：文章介紹了一個(gè)有趣的故事，一個(gè)人挨家挨戶的走，因?yàn)樗�想把自己介紹給所有的鄰居。在一對(duì)夫婦家，他誤以為一條狗是主人的，但是這對(duì)夫婦還以為這是他的狗。

1.故事情節(jié)很感人，用touching

2.這個(gè)人挨家挨戶的走，因?yàn)樗�想把自己介紹給所有的鄰居。這兩句話是因果關(guān)系：so改成because

3.主語(yǔ)是he賓語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是反身代詞：him改成himself

4.他認(rèn)為這個(gè)狗是屬于房子里面的人。Belong to沒(méi)有被動(dòng)式：belonged改成belonging

5.他認(rèn)為這個(gè)狗是屬于房子里面的，所以他沒(méi)有注意。but改成so

6.狗也進(jìn)來(lái)了。Either用于否定句中，改成too用于否定句

7.這對(duì)夫婦是上文提到過(guò)的，用定冠詞：a改成the

8.狗坐在他的膝蓋上，in改成on

9.這篇文章用的是一般過(guò)去式：Don’t改成didn’t

10.修飾動(dòng)詞pet用副詞：gentle改成gently

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)