Question

快餐現(xiàn)在在中國很流行，但快餐對人的身體卻沒什么好處。請根據(jù)以下要點以“Fast Food”為題寫一篇短文，準(zhǔn)備發(fā)表在一份生活雜志上。詞數(shù)：150左右。

現(xiàn)狀	快餐在中國非常流行，人們尤其是兒童和青少年喜歡吃快餐。
受歡迎的原因	方便，節(jié)約時間； 既可在快餐店里吃又可帶回家吃； 店里環(huán)境干凈、舒服； 服務(wù)周到，食品質(zhì)量有保證。
存在的問題	從營養(yǎng)角度講，快餐食品卻不盡如人意。
建議	如時間來不及可考慮吃快餐，但以偶爾品嘗為宜； …

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.

Answer 1

There are several reasons for its popularity. First of all, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. You just go into a fast food restaurant, order your food, and your food is ready in no time. Secondly, you can either eat there or take it away.Thirdly, the environment of fast food restaurant is both clean and comfortable. Fourthly, it has excellent service, and the quality of food is guaranteed. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory. It is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutritional value. Having too much fast food can have a bad effect on the health. Personally, fast food is only a good choice only when you are in a hurry and you should turn to it once in a while. It’s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。