Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高一新生Tom,請你給自己的初中同學(xué)Jack發(fā)一封郵件，簡要介紹自己的高中生活。

要點(diǎn)：1）已經(jīng)適應(yīng)了高中的生活，并且交了好多朋友。

2）非常想念過去的老師和同學(xué)們；與現(xiàn)在的同學(xué)相處很好，對老師很滿意。

3）自己一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，為的是三年以后能夠上一所好大學(xué)。

注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；

2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack,

How time flies!

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How time flies! We haven’t seen each other for a long time. Now I’d like to tell you something about my high school life.

I have been in the new school for more than two months. At the beginning of this term, I felt a little lonely. But now I have made many friends. By now, I have got used to my new life here. I miss all the teachers and classmates in junior middle school. At the same time, I get along well with my new classmates. The teachers here are very humorous and I like them very much. I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的電子郵件，寫作的話題為介紹你的高一生活，具體內(nèi)容包括剛進(jìn)入高中時(shí)的心情和感受，現(xiàn)在結(jié)交了一些朋友，對過去老師和學(xué)生們的想念，以及現(xiàn)在與同學(xué)和老師的關(guān)系，通常寫上高中學(xué)習(xí)的打算和個(gè)人的夢想，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意，注意郵件的格式和不同時(shí)態(tài)的使用，以及語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，語言樸實(shí)，句子銜接緊密，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。象范文中的I will make good use of my time, because it is my dream to go to a good university after three years’ hard work.使用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句和it做形式主語的句型，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象Firstly. Secondly, Thirdly, At the same time等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。