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第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)（共1題；滿分25分）
2010年4月14日7時(shí)45分許，青海省玉樹縣發(fā)生了里氏7.1級(jí)地震。1700多人遇難，1萬2千多人受傷，12所學(xué)校垮塌，孩子們無法上學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。為了幫助孩子們盡早回歸學(xué)校開始正常的學(xué)習(xí)生活，你校學(xué)生會(huì)在下周一的升旗儀式上號(hào)召同學(xué)捐款、捐書、捐學(xué)習(xí)用具等。假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，在下周一的升旗儀式上你將代表學(xué)生會(huì)向同學(xué)們發(fā)出口頭倡議，號(hào)召大家積極募捐，以實(shí)際行動(dòng)幫助災(zāi)區(qū)同學(xué)渡過難關(guān)。要點(diǎn)如下：
簡(jiǎn)單介紹災(zāi)區(qū)的受災(zāi)情況；
募捐的理由；
募捐的要求。
注意：
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詞數(shù)：100個(gè)左右。
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Dear schoolmates,
Good morning.
As we know, about 7:49a.m. on April 14, 2010, a Magnitude 7.1 earthquake hit Yushu County of Qinghai Province.
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Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
Good morning.
As we know, about 7:49a.m. on April 14, 2010, a Magnitude 7.1 earthquake hit Yushu County of Qinghai Province , causing a lot of damage。Recently our class have had a discussion on how to rebuild the quake –stricken area。
One group hold the view that the quake-stricken areas will benefit more from the help being offered 。as is known to all ，in the disaster some areas suffered great losses and were in need of money and materals 。in addition ，those alive are suffering great sorrow and pain, and then the help from the outside should play the leading role.
However, the other group argue that first we should encourage the poor people to act to help themselves. First, the local people ought to undertake the responsibility to rebuild their hometowns. And also their active participation in reconstruction will help them forget their sorrow and pain.
From my point of view, both of the two ways are necessary. As the saying goes,  “God helps those who help themselves”. With our assistance, the local people must be willing and able to devote themselves to the reconstruction work to create a better future.

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