Question

2012倫敦殘奧會(huì)the 2012 London Paralympic Games已進(jìn)入籌備工作，倫敦奧組委現(xiàn)向世界各地招募志愿者，招募具體情況見(jiàn)海報(bào)。
VOLUNTEER POST
We are looking for applications for the following posts:
*translator or interpreter
*social volunteer
*stadium volunteer
*transportation volunteer
the 2012 Olympic Committee
假如你是李華，17歲，現(xiàn)是鄭州四中高三年級(jí)的一名學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)上面海報(bào)中自己感興趣的一個(gè)志愿者工作給倫敦殘奧委寫(xiě)回信，應(yīng)征其中的一項(xiàng)志愿者工作�；匦乓�求包括如下內(nèi)容：
1、個(gè)人信息：名字（Li Hua），年齡，身份；
2、你的性格特點(diǎn)；
3、你的興趣、愛(ài)好、特長(zhǎng)；
4、你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。
注意：信的開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出(不計(jì)入詞數(shù))
Dear the 2012 London Paralympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your Volunteer Post. ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear the 2012 Paralympic Committee,
I am writing to apply for a position at your volunteer post. I would be interested in the work as an interpreter. I’m Li Hua. I’m 17this year. I’m a student in Zhengzhou No.4 High School Senior Three. I’m very cheerful and lively, and I like to make friends with people. I want to get the work of interpreter, because I like to speak English and read English novels. My favorite sports are skating and swimming, so I often go skating or swimming with friends at weekend. It helps me have a keen mind to report something on a fast speed and have a strong body to work day and night. I had got the first prize in the English Speech Competition of our city when I was fifteen. If I get the work, I will work hard, and make some contribution to the 2012 Paralympic Games. I am looking forward to your early reply..
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)已將寫(xiě)作提綱給出，按照順序?qū)懢唧w內(nèi)容，擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成句子，這一點(diǎn)并不難。當(dāng)然也可以根據(jù)實(shí)際不完全依照順序來(lái)。而如何將簡(jiǎn)單的句子就用靈活多樣的句子恰當(dāng)?shù)乇磉_(dá)出來(lái)，才是最重要的。如文中第五行my favourite sport are skating and swimming,若依然老套地寫(xiě)成I like skating and swimming就很象流水帳。
考點(diǎn)：這是一封應(yīng)聘信。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)這類(lèi)短文，并不太困難，切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。而難的是如何用高級(jí)詞匯或句式來(lái)組織這些由要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成的句子。故而需要在平時(shí)多作如句型轉(zhuǎn)換之類(lèi)的練習(xí)，來(lái)訓(xùn)練這方面的能力。平時(shí)也要多背誦此類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)。