Question

請根據(jù)下表提供的信息為《21世紀報(中學(xué)生版)》寫一篇150詞左右的報道，內(nèi)容為西部貧困地區(qū)的一所農(nóng)村學(xué)校接受”希望工程”資助后的變化。

	受資助前	受資助后
學(xué)校名稱	李家莊學(xué)校	希望學(xué)校
學(xué)生情況	多數(shù)學(xué)生因家貧輟學(xué)	輟學(xué)學(xué)生全部復(fù)學(xué)
辦學(xué)條件	只有一所危房作教室；操場只是一塊空地；一間辦公室	一棟2層教學(xué)樓，包括音樂室、美術(shù)室、微機室等；體育用品齊全
你的感想	……

注意：
1．應(yīng)該包括所給要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Children Return to School
Thanks to the Hope Project, great changes have taken place in a western country school.

Answer 1

Children Return to School
Thanks to the Hope Project, great changes have taken place in a western country school.
This school used to be called Lijiazhuang School. Most of its pupils left school because their families were too poor to pay for their education. The only unsafe house had to be used as their classroom. And all the teachers shared one workroom. The playground was nothing but an open land.
Things are different now. All the children who left school have come to continue their studies. In the school yard stands a two-storeyed teaching building. There are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The school is well equipped with sports facilities.
The school benefits from the Hope Project a great deal. For this reason, it is renamed Hope School.
The Hope Project is of great importance to our country. I hope that with help more and more children can get the opportunity to be educated. And I wish more and more people would offer to support the project.

本篇書面表達在貼近學(xué)生實際的學(xué)習(xí)生活的基礎(chǔ)上把話題稍加放大，能夠讓學(xué)生在表達完自己的思想后，對社會對生活有所感悟和思考，從而達到引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注社會關(guān)注生活的最終目的。
寫作過程中要注意以下幾個方面：
1. 引出話題內(nèi)容的題干部分一定要閱讀仔細。表格里面的信息要逐字品讀和揣摩。
2．表達的內(nèi)容主要體現(xiàn)出一種鮮明的變化對比來，所以用詞選句都要體現(xiàn)“對比”意味。
3.本文又一鮮明特點是有一小部分的開放內(nèi)容，及“你的感想”，可以說這是能讓學(xué)生更多的施展才華，彰顯個性的地方，但要注意方向性和限制性，不能亂表達。