Question

某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)社正開展一場題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?”的討論活動(dòng)。
請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文，客觀反映同學(xué)們的看法及你自己的觀點(diǎn)，向該報(bào)社投稿。

Elderly teachers	Young teachers	你的觀點(diǎn)
教學(xué)耐心 經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富 講解細(xì)致	精力充沛 教學(xué)活潑 勇于創(chuàng)新	？

注意：1. 短文詞數(shù)不少于100詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 短文應(yīng)當(dāng)包括以表格內(nèi)容，但不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；
3. 書寫務(wù)必清晰工整保持卷面整潔。
參考詞匯：enthusiastic 充滿熱情的   create new ideas創(chuàng)新
Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do you prefer?
Different students have different opinions about this question.____________________
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Answer 1

Different students have different opinions about this question.Some students may like elderly teachers because they think elderly teachers are more patient compared with young teachers. Besides, elderly teachers have more teaching experience so they can explain important points carefully.
However,other students prefer to be taught by young teachers.Firstly,young teachers are energetic and enthusiastic so they can make their classes more lively and interesting.Secondly,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas;thus they can work more creatively and effectively. Last but not least,young teachers have a lot in common with students,so they are not only teachers and students but also friends.
As far as I am concerned, as long as we can make progress in our studies, it doesn`t matter whether it is elderly teachers or young teachers who teach us.

試題分析：本文是關(guān)于年輕老師還是老教師的討論，屬于議論文。文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生只需要用連接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文即可。在寫作的使用要選擇合適的單詞或短語句型把要點(diǎn)的含義恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)出來，同時(shí)要變換使用各種句式，讓文章充滿變化。
點(diǎn)評：議論文寫作難點(diǎn)在于恰當(dāng)?shù)陌迅鞣N觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，本文的寫作一定要變換使用多種句式讓文章更有變化。以及使用高級的句型和連接詞。如果可能要使用諺語，讓文章更有層次。