Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分15分）

假如你是高二學(xué)生黎明。最近，某英文報(bào)刊正在進(jìn)行“怎樣才算是一名好學(xué)生”的討論�，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該報(bào)編輯寫(xiě)封信，從以下方面談?wù)勀銓?duì)此話題的看法。

1.校內(nèi)表現(xiàn)（尊敬老師、遵守校規(guī)、學(xué)習(xí)刻苦）；

2.校外表現(xiàn)（愛(ài)父母、做家務(wù)、做好公民）；

3.身體心智（健康）；

4.生活態(tài)度（積極）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100字左右。

2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。

3. 書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、工整

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student.____________________________________

                                                                       

                                                                       

                                                                       

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student. ①I(mǎi)’m writing to tell you what a good student should be like.

②In my opinion, a good student should respect his teachers and get on well with others. He should be hard-working and obey the school rules. ③While at home, he loves his parents and help them with some housework whenever needed. Once in a public place, he must be a good citizen. He shouldn’t do anything that is against the law or any other regulations. ④But the most important thing is that he must be healthy physically and mentally. ⑤Finally, a good student should not only care about study, but also hold an active attitude towards life.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards.                                    

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。