Question

假設(shè)你是一名班長(zhǎng)，學(xué)期結(jié)束時(shí)老師要你給同學(xué)們用英語作簡(jiǎn)短的評(píng)價(jià)，班里的林華同學(xué)這個(gè)學(xué)期以來變化很大。根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇短文。

過去	學(xué)習(xí)不努力，經(jīng)常與同學(xué)吵架； 亂扔垃圾，經(jīng)常打電腦游戲到深夜。
現(xiàn)在	自從老師找他談話以后有了較大改變。 與同學(xué)相處融洽，愛護(hù)校園和班級(jí)環(huán)境。 參加各類活動(dòng)。
希望	……

注意：1. 短文須包括所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

　　　2. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

   We are glade that Lin Hua has improved a lot this term

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Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad Lin Hua has improved a lot this term. As we all know, he didn’t study hard and always quarreled with his classmates in the past. He used to throw about rubbish. He often played computer games till very late at night. However, he has changed a lot since our teacher talked to him. Now he gets along well with his classmates and takes good care of the environment in our school and our classroom. He enjoys taking part in all kinds of activities. We all hope that he will behave better in the future.

 

【解析】

試題分析：考察提綱類短文。本文話題是林華現(xiàn)在與過去的變化，要特別注意時(shí)態(tài)，現(xiàn)在的情況使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，過去的情況使用一般過去時(shí)。要點(diǎn)基本上都以及給出，考生應(yīng)該用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試用復(fù)合句，如定語從句、同位語從句等，但句式不要單一，要形式多樣，要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間，段與段之間過渡自然。在寫作過程中牢牢記住以下口訣：“先讀提示，要點(diǎn)與格式要弄清；時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)要當(dāng)心，前后呼應(yīng)要一致，結(jié)構(gòu)搭配莫違背；文章寫好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視”。考生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】：本文中使用了一些高級(jí)句式：As we all know這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句。He often played computer games till very late at night.中狀語從句的運(yùn)用也很到位。高級(jí)的短語也較多，如quarrel with；used to；get along well with等等。連詞的使用不求多，但求實(shí)用。

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類短文