Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫用英語(yǔ)一篇120詞左右的短文.

Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result , we should be grateful to our parents, teachers and friends. Now write an article “Learn to be grateful”. Your composition should include the following points:

1.       why should you be grateful?

2.       to whom  and for what  should  you give thanks  ?

3.       How will you be grateful to other people by giving one or two examples?

Learn to be grateful

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Everybody can’t live happily and healthily without other’s help. As a result , we should be grateful to our parents, teachers and friends. Who shall we give our thanks to? I’d like to share my idea with you.

First, we should clarify why we are expected to learn to be grateful. Being grateful has always been a good quality in China, which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us. And I always think if everyone is grateful to our society, it will be more harmonious. If everyone has got a grateful heart to our parents, teachers and friends, love and happiness will greet us everyday.

Gratitude is so important and necessary that we should take action right away. Gratitude doesn't necessarily consist in how much money we spend or how great our deeds should be. We can just start with small things — give our parents a warm hug or make them a cup of tea, design beautiful thank-you cards for our dear teachers and send thank-you emails to our friends .

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。文章的要點(diǎn)是以英語(yǔ)提示給出來(lái)的，考生需要做的就是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行回答，包括：為什么要感激？向誰(shuí)表示感謝？怎樣感謝并舉一兩個(gè)例子說(shuō)明，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。如：Being grateful has always been a good quality in China, which can inspire a sense of responsibility in us.要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，F(xiàn)irst,second等詞使文章成為一個(gè)整體。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因?yàn)楸疚牡囊�求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。不要過(guò)去堆砌。