Question

寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分 35 分）
【小題1】請你對下文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行修改。文章中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下寫出修改后的詞
注意： 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

Dear John,
I’m very glad to have the honor to write to you after I’ve read your notice on the Internet.
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese and Chinese culture, I can’t wait to be your friend and offer my faithful help to you. We can share what we have and develop our understanding of each other’s country. If you like, I’ll send you some Chinese Fairy Tales. In this way you can learn some Chinese culture. We can also exchange our thoughts in learning and life. What’s your opinion?
I’m looking forward to your reply and let’s be close friends from now on.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。加拿大高中生John在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上登出啟事（notice）,希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化。你用英語給John發(fā)一封電子郵件，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的We can share what we have and develop our understanding of each other’s country.使用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
考點(diǎn)：考查書信類短文寫作。
點(diǎn)評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。