Question

七、短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題; 每小題0.5分，滿(mǎn)分5分）
假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中
有10處錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分。
Last summer vacation, I worked as a volunteer in a hospital, where I meet a little girl, Rosalyn, who was near eight years old. She just had operation in her leg but had to stay in bed for some time. I was amazing by her courage because she never cried even if she was suffered a great deal of pain. I once noticed her helping a little boy which parents couldn’t come to see him that day. She was sharing her sweets and toys for the boy and telling stories to calm him down. Soon she stopped crying. I wondered that if many grown-ups could be as kind as she was to others!

Answer 1

Last summer vacation, I worked as a volunteer in a hospital, where I meet a little girl, Rosalyn,
met
who was near eight years old. She just had∧operation in her leg but had to stay in bed for some
nearly                      an                 and
time. I was amazing by her courage because she never cried even if she was suffered a great deal
amazed                                     或者把suffered改為suffering
of pain. I once noticed her helping a little boy which parents couldn’t come to see him that day.
whose
She was sharing her sweets and toys for the boy and telling stories to calm him down. Soon she
with                                         he
stopped crying. I wondered that if many grown-ups could be as kind as she was to others!

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