第二節(jié) 短文寫作（滿分25分）

高中生在成長的過程中會碰到一些煩惱。你班就這一話題正積極籌備召開一次主題班會。請你依據(jù)下表進行必要的思考，并用英語準備一篇到會發(fā)言的材料。詞數(shù)120左右。

pains

solutions

相貌、體形不美

不必在意

不被他人理解，朋友少

加強溝通

學習滯后，壓力大

?

零花錢不多

?

注意：1．開頭已寫好，不記入詞數(shù)。

2．語言通順，結構嚴謹，針對問號處給出自己的觀點。

Good morning boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. ____________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________             ____________________________________________________________________

That’s all, thank you .

 

【答案】

Good morning ,boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange? So long as we have some, that’s enough. And we can learn to spend money wisely.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】略

 

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