Question

假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school，but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
寫作要點：
1．表明自己的看法；
2．陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；
3．提出至少兩條建議。
要求：
1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。
2．短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。
3．內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。
4．書寫須清晰、工整。
Hi，TigerMom，
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________

Answer 1

One possible version：
Hi，TigerMom，
What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China.My_idea_is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

本文是一封回信，也是一篇半開放性的作文。題材比較新穎，對考生的要求也比較高，要求考生根據(jù)前一封信篩選要點，學(xué)習(xí)成績不是衡量學(xué)生的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，應(yīng)該讓學(xué)生自由發(fā)展這應(yīng)該是回信的要點所在。在寫作時要注意使用較高級的詞匯如mentally and physically.也應(yīng)該使用一些好的關(guān)聯(lián)詞如Furthermore等！