Question

假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。請用英語給出版社會(huì)的編輯寫封信，表達(dá)你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語材料的看法，內(nèi)容主要包括：

優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1. 話題廣泛；2 圖片豐富；3 有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣。

建議：適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

As a student editor, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published

by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us, Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into other ones.

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文，是關(guān)于現(xiàn)行教材的看法的。主要的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了，細(xì)節(jié)方面需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充。在寫作的時(shí)候，要注意使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更有條理更流暢。同時(shí)也要使用高級的詞匯和高級的句型，讓文章更有檔次，更有層次。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文的寫作

點(diǎn)評：半開放性作文的難度較大，要求考生自己根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容梳理要點(diǎn)，然后在整理成文，在寫作時(shí)要合理運(yùn)用連接詞和高級詞匯高級句型，讓文章更有層次。