Question

假設(shè)你是某外國語學(xué)校學(xué)生會主席李華，在期末考試即將來臨之際，為了抵制作弊，請你以學(xué)生的名義用英語寫一份倡議書，在校園英文廣播節(jié)目中播出。
要點(diǎn)提示：
陳述作弊的危害；  2.倡議同學(xué)們抵制作弊。
注意：
詞數(shù)100左右；    2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear fellow students,
As our final exams are approaching, I’d like to call on all of you to reject cheating. ______________________________________________
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Honesty is one of the best virtues. Let’s reject cheating!
Students’  Union

Answer 1

Dear fellow students,
As our final exams are approaching, I’d like to call on all of you to reject cheating.
As we all know, the purpose of exams is to test how we are getting along with our learning. If we cheat in exams, our teachers will not know whether we have acquired the required knowledge. Besides, if we get a good score by cheating, we might think there is no need for us to work hard. So I offer some suggestions here: Firstly, we should develop a positive attitude towards exams. It’s a shame to get a good score in a dishonest way. Secondly, work hard at our lessons. We can do well in the exam if we make full preparations in advance.
Honesty is one of the best virtues. Let’s reject cheating.
Student’s Union 

試題分析：本文的寫作首先對考試的主要目的進(jìn)行簡單的介紹，對作弊在考試中的危害一方面來使不知道是否我們已經(jīng)掌握了這些知識our teachers will not know whether we have acquired the required knowledge.其次是我們可能會覺得沒有必要努力了there is no need for us to work hard.然后對這個現(xiàn)象提出自己的禁止作弊的倡議，同樣從兩個方面，首先應(yīng)該有個積極的態(tài)度develop a positive attitude towards exams.其次是應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)work hard at our lessons.最后發(fā)出倡議Honesty is one of the best virtues. Let’s reject cheating.
點(diǎn)評：書面表達(dá)是最能體現(xiàn)一個學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力和英語思維理解的題目，議論文的寫作相對比較容易，對于表達(dá)內(nèi)容層次時需要使用平時積累的層次關(guān)系的短語，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。