Question

陳若琳，1992年12月12日生于江蘇南通。4歲開始練習(xí)跳水。她克服困難，艱苦訓(xùn)練。拼搏精神指引她成功，在2012年倫敦奧運(yùn)會(huì)上獲得兩枚金牌。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合陳若琳的實(shí)例，并根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)拼搏精神的看法。

拼搏精神的意義	1．激勵(lì)我們直面困難；
	2．竭力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)，走向成功；
	……
如何培養(yǎng)拼搏精神	1．要堅(jiān)信人人都有獲得成功的潛力；
	2．遇到挫折不氣餒，從失敗中學(xué)習(xí)；
	……

 
注意：1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；
2．詞數(shù)150左右；
3．參考詞匯：拼搏精神 determination 培養(yǎng)  cultivate   挫折     setback

Answer 1

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Born in Nantong, Jiangsu Province on December 12, 1992, Chen Ruolin took up diving at the age of four. Since then, she has been training hard and overcoming whatever difficulty. She won two gold medals at the 2012 London Olympic Games. It is her great determination that has led her to success.
In my opinion, determination is very important in our lives. It encourages us to move forward, especially during our hard times. This quality enables us to face difficulty bravely and never run away from it. Thus we can stick to our goals and succeed eventually.
It is not easy to cultivate determination. Above all, we must hold a belief that everyone has the potential to achieve success. We shouldn’t be discouraged when faced with setbacks. Actually, failure can teach us a lot. What’s more, there are quite a few people with this spirit around us. We can learn a lot from them.

解析試題分析：1. 仔細(xì)審題。根據(jù)寫作任務(wù)，要求學(xué)生認(rèn)真審讀提綱，領(lǐng)會(huì)意圖，捕捉信息，確定文章時(shí)態(tài)及體裁。2. 撰寫提綱。構(gòu)思文章要點(diǎn)，寫出每個(gè)段落主題句、關(guān)鍵詞，然后確定細(xì)節(jié)和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。3. 簡(jiǎn)寫初稿。經(jīng)過審題和列提綱后，開始寫作，有意識(shí)地使用固定句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞，把段落按邏輯順序連成一體，形成基本連貫的初稿。復(fù)查是書面表達(dá)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)。要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無習(xí)語及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。