Question

隨著時代的發(fā)展和對外開放的不斷深入，越來越多的學生選擇出國留學深造，請就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文發(fā)表你的看法（原因，利弊，你的觀點）。

要求：1.語言正確，邏輯通順，層次清楚；

2.字數(shù)：120字左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

With the economic development of our country, more and more students choose to go abroad for further study. This phenomenon has drawn great attention.

Some people think it is great to study abroad.  If you go abroad, you can expand your horizons and experience the local culture at the same time. Also, you can make friends with more people. Above all, you can master a foreign language more quickly if you live in a place where the language is widely spoken.

Other people don't think it a good idea to go abroad. They think students who have language barrier may come across great difficulties in their study. And the expense for going abroad is too high. If you want to lower the expense by working part-time, your study will be influenced.

In my opinion, going abroad for further study is a good choice for people who can afford it. But for those who are not rich enough, they had better study here in China.

【解析】

試題分析：先讀提示，要點要弄清；時態(tài)語態(tài)要當心，前后呼應要一致，結構搭配莫違背；文章寫好細檢查，點滴小錯別忽視。學生在明確目的和掌握要領后，要嚴格按照規(guī)定的時間去完成作文訓練任務。最后要檢查（1）要點是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復數(shù)等有無錯誤。（4）用詞是否得當，有無習語及固定搭配等方面的錯誤。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。