Question

你叫李華。最近, 你們班同學(xué)就“地球一小時(shí)”（Earth Hour）活動(dòng)展開了一場(chǎng)熱烈的討論。下表是這次討論的結(jié)果。請(qǐng)你用英語給《中學(xué)英語報(bào)》主編寫一封信, 介紹你們班的討論結(jié)果并闡明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

60％的同學(xué)支持	40％的同學(xué)反對(duì)	你的看法
引起人們對(duì)全球氣候變暖的關(guān)注	做秀, 意義不大	……
節(jié)約能源	收效甚微
全世界共同努力, 保護(hù)地球	給人們生活, 學(xué)習(xí)和工作帶來不便
……	……

注意： 1.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右      2.開頭結(jié)果已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：做秀show 不便inconvenience

Dear Editor,

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour.  ____                  

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Yours

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour. Different students have different opinions about this activity．

About 60% of the students are in favor of it. As we all know, global warming is a big problem in the world. Earth Hour can raise people’s awareness of global warming. Besides, turning off lights for an hour is energy-saving. Only by working together can we make our earth a better place to live in.

However, about 40% of the students say this activity is not very meaningful. They think it is only a show and that it doesn’t make much difference. What’s more, turning off lights for an hour may cause inconvenience to people’s life, work and study.

In my opinion, this activity is of great importance. But one activity alone is not enough if we want to save energy and protect our earth. Let’s act through our day-to-day habits.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，討論的話題是“地球一小時(shí)”；要求同學(xué)們就此觀點(diǎn)做出自己的選擇并說明理由，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：考查正反觀點(diǎn)類議論文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見時(shí)使用第一人稱。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。