Question

假設你是某中學的學生李華，最近收到美國朋友Joy的電子郵件。他在三年前參觀過你校，聽說你校現在變化很大，希望了解發(fā)生了哪些具體的變化。請你根據下表提示，給他回一封電子郵件。

三年前	一座教學樓，一個操場，學生1000多人
現在	1. 校園擴建：新建了一座教學樓和一座圖書館，教學樓內有音樂室、美術室、微機房等； 2. 學生人數：增加到了2000多人； 3. 體育設施與音樂器材配備齊全； 4. 綠化了校園。

 

注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯: 體育設施 sports facilities  裝備 equip

Dear Joy,

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.

___________________________________________________________________

                                                             Yours,

                                                             Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Joy,

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.

As is known to you, great changes have taken place in my school. It is no longer what it used to be three years ago, when there was only one teaching building and a playground. Now two new buildings have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in which there are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The other is the library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,000 to 2,000. What’s more, we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school will become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

                                                            Yours,

                                                            Li Hua

【解析】這是一封介紹學校變化的信，內容貼近考生生活，考生有完成該作文的興趣和能力。要求考生根據所給中文提示，準確表達，在描述的時候，適當運用高級的詞匯和句型，使文章句式多樣化。句子與句子之間使用恰當的連接詞，使文章更加連貫，自然