Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang'an Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it be?come louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.

Customer Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear sir,

Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on bought

Chang'an Road. We all like A shape of the refrigerator.

the

And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it A turned on. At first it is low

is (或去掉it)

.but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the becomes

matter worse,it even stops working sometimes. We all feel

disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you disappointed

please send a people to repair it? I will A at home man/person be/stay

this weekend. Please call me before you come 、here. My

telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.

Thank

Customer Li Ming