Question

假如你是某英文雜志負責“與讀者對話”欄目的編輯。請根據(jù)下面這封讀者來信寫一封回信，幫助解決讀者來信中提出的問題。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總數(shù)；

      3. 可根據(jù)要點適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Editor,

I am going to take the college entrance examination soon. I have to work harder and harder to prepare for it so that I could enter a good college. However, it’s hard for me to understand what my teachers say in class. Though I tell myself again and again I should hold on, I have little confidence in myself. What should I do now?

Best wishes,

                                                             Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Li Hua,

Thank you for your letter. As for the entrance exams, you have come too far and worked too hard to quit now. There are only a few months left until the exams so you can make a final push to get the best result you can. I have some tips for you and I hope they are helpful.

The first thing you should do is to make a good study plan. If you follow the plan and concentrate on what you’re doing, it helps you study effectively.

Besides, don’t forget to include at least three hours of exercise each week to keep your mind sharp.

What’s more, make the most out of class. Preview lessons before the class and it helps you follow the teachers in class and have a good knowledge of what is important but difficult. Do review what is done wrong and learn lessons from mistakes.

Above all, building up confidence is essential to success. Only when you believe in yourself, can you keep up your spirits and be successful.

Now, take some time to be with your family and enjoy yourself for Spring Festival, then get to work.

Best wishes,

                                                             Editor

【解析】

試題分析：本文對考生的要求較高，要求考生首先讀懂原文，再根據(jù)文字提示寫作。原文是一位高三的學生學習上遇見困難在尋求幫助�；匦诺囊�點都隱含在信中，再讀懂文章的基礎上，要考生自己歸納出來，再一一進行解決，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成文，如to begin with首先；besides而且；what’s more等。也要注意運用適當?shù)母呒壘湫腿缍ㄕZ從句，強調(diào)句等讓文章不顯得那么平淡，而有文采。在詞匯的運用上也要注意，使用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：make the most out of充分利用， have a good knowledge of 很好了解，Above all最重要的是, building up增強，范文中的句式多變，運用不同的語法知識：The first thing you should do is to make a good study plan. 這句話用了定語從句和不定式，If you follow the plan and concentrate on what you’re doing, it helps you study effectively. 這句話用了賓語從句， Do review what is done wrong and learn lessons from mistakes.這句話用個強調(diào)句， Only when you believe in yourself, can you keep up your spirits and be successful. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章還使用了Besides, What’s more,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加通順。

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