Question

寫作：（滿分25分）

國內(nèi)某家英文報紙設(shè)有一個求助信箱（letters to Dr Helper）。請根據(jù)一份學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀中列出的部分信息，以高三學(xué)生王勇的名義，用英語給Dr Helper寫一封短信。

學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀：

1．每日在校時間9小時；

2．每日作業(yè)時間3-4小時；

3．每日課外活動時間幾乎沒有；

4．每日睡眠時間不足；

負(fù)擔(dān)過重原因：

考試壓力大，作業(yè)多，家長期望高。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入要求的詞數(shù)。

生詞：負(fù)擔(dān)過重overload 壓力 pressure 期望 expectations 

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.

                                                                                     

 

                                                                                    

 

                                                                                    

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

 

Answer 1

【答案】

參考范文：

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home . We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves,but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides ,we even don’t have enough sleep .

There seems to be three causes about the overload ;the pressure of examinations ,too much homework and the high expectations from the parents . We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.

I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作（求助信），寫作內(nèi)容與學(xué)生日常生活和學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)。寫作要點為：現(xiàn)狀和三大負(fù)擔(dān)過重原因（現(xiàn)象），如何減負(fù)？