Question

短文改錯。
     假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共
有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
     增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
     刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
     修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
     注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
                 2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student,I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single
room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties
at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope
to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only
solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building but as near to the school campus
as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,
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Answer 1

Dear Sir,
     How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single
                              1. an  
room in next term,as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties
       2. 去掉                                                                                                                    3. holds
at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturb me a lot. So I hope to
         4. making                                                                             5. which   6. disturbs
draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only 
              7. attention                                                                              8. you
solution for me is ∧ get a room of my own, one not in the same building but as near to the school campus
                         9. to
as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
                                  10. grateful
     Best wishes.
                                                                                                                             Yours sincerely,