Question

假設(shè)你是紅旗中學(xué)高二一班的學(xué)生小明，你班將舉行《我的夢(mèng)想》（My Dream）的英文主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上與同學(xué)進(jìn)行交流。要點(diǎn)如下：

1、夢(mèng)想職業(yè)---記者；

2、職業(yè)要求：思維敏捷，有創(chuàng)造力，對(duì)事情有獨(dú)特觀點(diǎn)；

3、自己的兩點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)（考生自由發(fā)揮）；

4、為實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)而努力。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于120。（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist. As far as I know, it is a great challenge to be a journalist. First of all, we have to be sharp in mind so as to react to different situations quickly. Secondly, creativity can help us produce outstanding ideas. What’s more, it is necessary for us to hold unique opinions towards hot issues.

Just as you see, my qualities just meet the requirements above. Besides, I am social and love communicating with different people. It is an essential character helping me gather a wide variety of news materials. And I have plenty of hobbies, which inspire me to have the passion of covering stories in different fields.

I believe all these can make me a good journalist as long as I am committed and never give up.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿。文章首句已寫好，第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)也已經(jīng)寫好。寫作的要點(diǎn)集中在寫“記者的職業(yè)要求”及“我的優(yōu)勢(shì)”。職業(yè)要求包括三點(diǎn)：1.思維敏捷2。有創(chuàng)造力3.對(duì)事情有獨(dú)特觀。可以用一些表示并列的詞或遞進(jìn)的詞進(jìn)行連接。如：First of all，Secondly， What’s more等詞。其中“我的優(yōu)勢(shì)”部分，需要自己發(fā)揮，寫出兩點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)。屬于半開(kāi)放型作文。同樣可用一些詞進(jìn)行層次連接。文章最后表達(dá)我的決心：為實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)而努力。

考點(diǎn)：發(fā)言稿

點(diǎn)評(píng)：談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)理想的發(fā)言稿。第一部分：開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山地提出本人要談的問(wèn)題——理想是什么，第二部分：說(shuō)明理由：為什么選擇這一理想。如：對(duì)理想的認(rèn)識(shí)，個(gè)人具備的優(yōu)勢(shì)。常用到的連接成分有：first of all,secondly,finally等等。第三部分：照應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，總結(jié)全文�？梢詫�(duì)全文作簡(jiǎn)明扼要的總結(jié)，也可以談自己的感想、看法或期望。常用到的句式有：In short…,In a word,I think,I expect等