假設(shè)你叫李華,最近你看到家鄉(xiāng)村子里的大樹落下很多葉子。這些葉子的顏色不是黃色的,而是深褐色的,上面還有不少的小洞。這顯然是害蟲(pest)造成的。你認(rèn)為這與捕殺鳥類有關(guān),因?yàn)槟愠?吹接腥嗽谔镆袄铽C鳥。你投稿《中國日報(bào)》編輯部反映這一情況,并呼吁對獵鳥者予以懲罰,以保護(hù)鳥類。

注意:

   1.信的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

   2.信的內(nèi)容須包括所有要點(diǎn),但不要逐條譯成英語;

   3.詞數(shù):100左右

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解析:

One possible version:

July 9, 2004

Dear editor,

  Our hometown is very beautiful. There are many tall trees in the village.But these days I am surprised to notice that many leaves have fallen from the trees. The fallen leaves aren't yellow, but dark brown instead. Besides, there are many small holes in them. Obviously, this was caused by pests. We think it has something to do with the killing of birds. I often find people shooting at birds in the fields. We should do something to stop them from killing birds. Those who shoot at birds must be punished.

  With best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua


提示:

建議使用句型:

   am surprised to notice ...   stop sb. from doing ...

建議使用動(dòng)詞:   fall from... be caused by ..., be punished 

建議使用過渡性詞語:  besides, obviously 

寫作技巧提示:

 句式熟記3:

1.  i. used + to 原形動(dòng)詞 “(過去)常常、經(jīng)常……”

   He used to take a walk every morning. “他(過去)每天早上散步”

   ii. be used to + 名詞 “習(xí)慣于……”

   (1) He is used to 〔doing〕such a thing. “他習(xí)慣了做這樣的事”

   (2) He, of course, suggested seeing her home, which she wouldn't hear of at first---she said there was really no need, she was used to the journey alone and her parents' house was only a few minutes' walk from the station. “當(dāng)然他說他要送她回家,起先她沒答應(yīng),說實(shí)在不必要,她已習(xí)慣一個(gè)人走,何況父母的家離車站只需幾分鐘!

2. be + to 原形動(dòng)詞 表示“預(yù)定、義務(wù)"

 We are to meet at Beijing Railway Station. “我們說好了要在北京火車站見面”

3. 祈使句 + , and … “~ 的話,就……”

  祈使句 + , or…  “~的話,否則就……”

 (1) Work hard, and you will succeed. “努力工作就會成功!

 (2) Work hard, or you will fail. “努力工作,不然會失敗。”

 (3) Ask a European critic to name the two leading American poets, and in most cases he will reply, "Poe and Whitman, "“要是請歐洲的批評家舉出兩個(gè)一流的美國詩人的話,他大多會回答:“愛倫坡和惠特曼”!

4. “要不是 ~, 早就……”

  i. If it were not for (=Were it not for) + 名詞

  If it were not for (=Were it not for/But for) his help, I should fail. “要不是他的幫忙,我早就失敗了!

  ii. If it had not been for(=Had it not been for) + 名詞

   If it had not been for (=Had it not been for/But for) this, I would have employed him.

   “要不是這個(gè),我早就雇用他了!

  iii. But for + 名詞

  iv. But that + 從句

   But that he has a family, he would have left England long ago. “要不是有個(gè)家,他早就離開英國了!

5. “助動(dòng)詞 + 主語 =if條件句"

  (1) Were I you, I should do it in another way. “我要是你的話,就會用別的方式做。”

  (2) Many of the successful men, had they been able to choose for themselves, would have selected some quite different profession from that in which they have made their fortunes.

   “許多事業(yè)有成的人,要是他們能夠自由選擇職業(yè)的話,他們所選的將大大不同于他們發(fā)過財(cái)?shù)穆殬I(yè)!

 提示: were, had, should, would, could等動(dòng)詞或助動(dòng)詞放在主語之前,可表示條件。上例的Were I you可改成If I were you 。

 6. “名詞 + and”=副詞從句

   A few minutes, and they went away. “幾分鐘過后,他們走了!

 提示: 名詞 + ,and”可改成以if, when, after等詞開頭的副詞從句。

   A few minutes, and = When a few minutes had passed。

 7. if any“要是有的話”

  There are few, if any, such men. “這樣的人要是有的話也很少”

  提示:“if any”是指if there are any such men,強(qiáng)調(diào)few。

 提示: if any, if ever, if at all等插入語是用來強(qiáng)調(diào)隱含否定語意的詞(little, few, seldom等)。

8. i. something (much) of ~ “有幾分(非常)~”

  ii. nothing (little) of ~ “一點(diǎn)(幾乎)都沒有~”

  (1) He is something of a poet. “他有幾分像詩人的樣子”

  (2) She is nothing of a poet. “她一點(diǎn)都沒有詩人的樣子”

  (3) If he is anything of a gentleman, he will keep his promise, I should think.

    “要是他有幾分紳士的風(fēng)范,我想他一定會說話算話”

  (4) Although not a strong boy, there was nothing of the coward about him.

“他雖不是強(qiáng)壯的男孩,卻絲毫沒懦弱的樣子”

  提示: 這種用法表示“程度”。類似的表達(dá)還有 “a great (good) deal of” (非常),“a little (bit) of”(有點(diǎn)),“not much of”(不太)等。 疑問句、條件句用“anything of”。

  He is more of a scholar than a teacher. (與其說他是老師不如說他是學(xué)者)

  提示:為“much of”的比較級用法。

9. one thing … another~ “……是一回事 ~ 又是另一回事”

  (1) It is one thing to read and another to write.“讀是一回事,寫又是一回事”

  (2) It is one thing to own a library;it is another to use it wisely. “擁有藏書是一回事,知道如何利用藏書又是另一回事”

10. i. anything but ~ “絕不是 ~ (=never)”

  ii. nothing but ~ “只不過是 ~ (=only)”

  iii. all but~ “幾乎, 差不多~ (=almost, nearly)”

 (1) He is anything but a scholar. “他絕不是學(xué)者”

 (2) He is nothing but a scholar. “他只不過是個(gè)學(xué)者”

 (3) The boy all but fell into the well. “這男孩子差點(diǎn)兒掉進(jìn)井里”

 提示: 這三句中but指“除~之外”!癮nything but~”意指“除了 ~ 之外"的任何事物;絕不是 ~”, 目的在強(qiáng)調(diào)否定。anything but之前若有否定詞,意指“只不過是~”,即“否定詞 + anything but”=“nothing but”。all but與almost, nearly意義相同。


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