假定你叫李華,準(zhǔn)備寫信給學(xué)英語報社編輯,反映你最近生活中所遇到的煩惱。
要點如下:
最近遇到一些問題,不知好聽何做,希望得到幫助。
你這幾年一直是校隊很棒的籃球運(yùn)動員,教練認(rèn)為你將來有望成為球星。
你父母認(rèn)為你學(xué)習(xí)一般,應(yīng)該在學(xué)習(xí)上多花時間提高成績,這樣才能上好大學(xué)。訓(xùn)練或參加比賽占據(jù)了你太多時間,所以沒有更多時間用來學(xué)習(xí),為此,他們很生氣,不允許你參加訓(xùn)練或比賽。
你自己的觀念:十分喜歡打球,希望多得到鍛煉,成為超級明星。
注意:1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括提示的全部要點;(請不要逐句翻譯以上要點)
2.詞數(shù)在100左右;
詞匯 :編輯:editor 教練: coach 訓(xùn)練: train 超級明星:super star
Dear editor,
I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One Possible Version
Dear editor,
I have had a problem recently and I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.
I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades. In this way, I can go to a good university in the future.
However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games. They are angry with me and don’t allow me to do it again.
As for me,I like basketball and I hoped I will be well trained and become a super star.
Look forward to getting your advice soon.
Yours,
Li Hong
【解析】
試題分析:書信應(yīng)該遵循書信的寫作格式,有稱呼,正文,結(jié)束語。正文是書信的主要部分。稱呼語下方開始寫正文。正文要言之有物、內(nèi)容清晰、語言簡練、態(tài)度謙遜。寫給報社編輯的信要根據(jù)自己的實際情況,力求詳細(xì),誠懇的敘述自己的事情。書信不用很多陳腐詞句和無聊套語,力求通俗、簡化。寫作時要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后,用詞要得體,符合語言環(huán)境。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.Look forward to,it always takes me a lot of time to practice and take part in games.還運(yùn)用了so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如:In this way, However,As you know,As for me, 等等。
考點:提綱作文。
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