Question

假定你叫李華，準(zhǔn)備寫信給學(xué)英語(yǔ)報(bào)社編輯，反映你最近生活中所遇到的煩惱。

要點(diǎn)如下：

最近遇到一些問(wèn)題，不知好聽(tīng)何做，希望得到幫助。

你這幾年一直是校隊(duì)很棒的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，教練認(rèn)為你將來(lái)有望成為球星。

你父母認(rèn)為你學(xué)習(xí)一般，應(yīng)該在學(xué)習(xí)上多花時(shí)間提高成績(jī)，這樣才能上好大學(xué)。訓(xùn)練或參加比賽占據(jù)了你太多時(shí)間，所以沒(méi)有更多時(shí)間用來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)，為此，他們很生氣，不允許你參加訓(xùn)練或比賽。

你自己的觀念：十分喜歡打球，希望多得到鍛煉，成為超級(jí)明星。

注意：1.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括提示的全部要點(diǎn)；（請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯以上要點(diǎn)） 

2.詞數(shù)在100左右；

詞匯 ：編輯：editor  教練:  coach   訓(xùn)練: train    超級(jí)明星：super star

Dear editor，

I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.                                                                       

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One Possible Version

Dear editor,

  I have had a problem recently and I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.

  I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades. In this way, I can go to a good university in the future.

  However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks I have a chance to become a real future star. As you know, it always takes me a lot of time to practise and take part in games. They are angry with me and don’t allow me to do it again.

  As for me,I like basketball and I hoped I will be well trained and become a super star.

  Look forward to getting your advice soon.

Yours,

Li Hong

【解析】

試題分析：書(shū)信應(yīng)該遵循書(shū)信的寫作格式，有稱呼，正文，結(jié)束語(yǔ)。正文是書(shū)信的主要部分。稱呼語(yǔ)下方開(kāi)始寫正文。正文要言之有物、內(nèi)容清晰、語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、態(tài)度謙遜。寫給報(bào)社編輯的信要根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況，力求詳細(xì)，誠(chéng)懇的敘述自己的事情。書(shū)信不用很多陳腐詞句和無(wú)聊套語(yǔ)，力求通俗、簡(jiǎn)化。寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如I don’t know what to do between what I want and what my parents want.Look forward to，it always takes me a lot of time to practice and take part in games.還運(yùn)用了so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：In this way,  However,As you know,As for me, 等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。