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第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假如你叫華華，進(jìn)入高三后一直想買一個MP3，但是母親反對。請你根據(jù)下表中的信息，給媽媽寫一封信，說服她滿足你的愿望。

使用MP3的目的	承諾
1．聽語文、英語課文錄音	1．只在課外學(xué)習(xí)疲勞時和睡覺前聽
2．偶爾聽音樂放松大腦	2．作為回報，多做家務(wù)

      
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mum,
As I’m in Senior 3, I strongly feel the urge to get an MP3 player, so I’m writing to you．For one thing,
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Hope you’ll satisfy this request of mine．
Yours,
Hua Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mum,
As I’m in Senior 3, I strongly feel the urge to get an MP3 player, so I’m writing to you．For one thing, it will help me with my lessons, because I can listen to the English and Chinese texts stored on it, which will obviously benefit me a lot in my study．For another, if I have an MP3 player, I can listen to some music when I feel tired with my lessons, which will in turn improve my study efficiency．
I know you fear it may have some bad effect on my study．Please don’t worry．I promise I will only use it after class when I feel tired, and listen to it before I go to sleep．And in return for your kindness of getting one for me, I will do some hosework．
Hope you’ll satisfy this request of mine．
Yours,
Hua Hua

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