Question

假如你是某外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校高三學(xué)生李華。近來，你發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)課間休息時(shí)間坐在教室里學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫信給校長(zhǎng)反映這一問題，并呼吁同學(xué)們注意學(xué)習(xí)效率。

1. 反映問題；

2. 你的看法；

3. 你的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

3. 信的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. ___________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua, a senior 3 student in your school. I’m writing to tell you about a problem. At present, many students stay in the classroom to study during the ten-minute break between classes.

In my opinion, it is very important to take a break between classes. Otherwise students will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we can do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more exhausted. So relaxation in that period is really of great benefit to us.

As far as I’m concerned, to study effectively, we should combine our study with amusement; meanwhile, doing some sports is also a good way. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Only in this way will we be able to study effectively.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查了半開放性作文，本文只給出了一個(gè)話題，關(guān)于課間很多學(xué)生都在認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)而不愿意休息。你認(rèn)為這種做法是不明智的，因?yàn)檎n間就是讓學(xué)生休息調(diào)整的，如果課間不休息，會(huì)大大影響上課的效率，反而是得不償失。你的建議是不僅僅課間要休息，而且還要好好休息。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文

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