Question

書面表達(dá) ( 滿分25分 )
假如你叫李華，最近收到好朋友Mike的來(lái)信，得知他染上了吸煙的習(xí)慣，你很為他擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)給他寫一封信。
1．表明自己的看法； 2．談?wù)勎鼰煹奈：Γ�可舉例說明）； 3．提出至少兩條建議。
注意：
1、短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。   
2、短文詞數(shù)不少于100。
3、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。 
4、書寫需清晰、工整。
5、首句已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking,

Answer 1

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Since I heard you have got into the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.
You see, not only does smoking waste your money and time, but it is harmful to your health physically and mentally. As a high school student, you should study hard and stop smoking immediately. Although it is hard to get rid of smoking, I hope you will follow my advice.
First， choose a day when you feel relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits to remind yourself when you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Hu

解析試題分析：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，首先表明自己對(duì)這件事的看法，可從金錢、時(shí)間及其健康方面進(jìn)行闡述吸煙的危害，再舉例對(duì)其進(jìn)行說明，寫作中注意使用平時(shí)積累的“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”的連詞，使用萬(wàn)能句型造句，最后提出自己的建議。提建議時(shí)可使用firstly, secondly, finally等分開闡述，以顯得層次分明。
考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文中建議性類文體
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于應(yīng)用文寫作要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，直入主題，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬(wàn)能句型的積累，高中作文寫作，要注意 在寫作之前，首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來(lái)，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會(huì)錯(cuò)的。寫的過程中，多注意靈活使用定語(yǔ)從句，包括非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。要熟悉英美人寫文章的習(xí)慣，遇到專有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)唯一性。平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達(dá)，考試時(shí)才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。