Question

（2009.陜西卷）書面表達（滿分30分）

假定你是李華。在一個英文網絡論壇上, 你看到一個名叫Grown-up的中學生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助, 請根據帖子內容, 寫作要點和要求回貼。

 

寫作要點：

1. 告訴Grown-up要理解母親；

2. 給Grown-up提出解決問題的具體建議。

要求：

1. 短文需寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。

2. 短文詞數不少于80（不含已寫好的部分）。

3. 內容充實, 結構完整, 語意連貫。

4. 書寫須清晰、工整。 Ks5

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Grown-up,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it’s advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.

Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.

【解析】考生在寫作中應該注意如下幾點：

1. 文體：應用文（電子郵件）。

2. 主體時態(tài)：一般現在時。

3. 主體人稱：第二人稱。

4. 內容要點：① 問題介紹；②建議一；③建議二；④我的愿望。

亮點句式：

1.         The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.

2.         Here are a few suggestions.

3.         it’s advisable to talk more with your mom.

4.         They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.

5.         Second, you should learn to do your own things well.