Question

假設(shè)你是一名記者，采訪某動(dòng)物園負(fù)責(zé)人有關(guān)國(guó)寶大熊貓的情況。下面是你采訪動(dòng)物園負(fù)責(zé)人的談話要點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)談話要點(diǎn)為《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》寫篇專題報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：
1．熊貓是世界上稀有（rare）動(dòng)物，人們非常喜歡它。
2．很久以前中國(guó)有許多熊貓，但由于生態(tài)遭到破壞，加上天氣變暖，熊貓?jiān)絹?lái)越少了。
3．現(xiàn)在中國(guó)大熊貓數(shù)量每年都在增加，其中一些已被送到國(guó)外供人們觀賞。
4．目前中國(guó)最大的熊貓自然公園在四川。這里有一個(gè)野生動(dòng)物研究中心，熊貓的生長(zhǎng)就是在這里研究的�？茖W(xué)家們希望有一天有足夠的熊貓可以放出去，讓它們重新生活在曠野中。
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Answer 1

Panda is one of the rarest animals . People in the world like it very much . There used to be many pandas in China long ago . As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer , pandas became less . But at present , the number of pandas is increasing year by year . There are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them .
Nowadays , the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan . There is a research centre for nature and wild life there . Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again .

試題分析：本文非常簡(jiǎn)單，介紹熊貓的情況。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，只是把文章翻譯成英文即可，在寫作的過(guò)程中不要總是使用陳述句，可以變換使用倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等形式。也可以使用一些較高級(jí)的詞匯來(lái)表達(dá)文章的意思，讓文章更有文采。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)要點(diǎn)，不能有任何的遺漏。高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)短語(yǔ)已經(jīng)合適的連接詞運(yùn)用要到位。