Question

書面表達（滿分25分）

假設你是Tom，曾在中國學習半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的中國老師Mr.Yang, 但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請根據(jù)以下要點給你的中國同學李華寫一封信：

1. 感謝李華對你漢語學習的幫助；

2. 詢問Mr. Yang 的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；

3. 邀請李華在圣誕節(jié)期間來美國感受美國文化。

Answer 1

Dear Li hua，   

How is everything going recently? After I came back from America half a year ago, I ofen remember the days I was there, and I missed you and Ms.Smith very much. I am writing to ask about someting about Ms.Smith. Could you tell me her email address or telephone number that I could contact her? I have something important to tell her.     

As you know, the Spring Festival in China is coming soon, I really hope you could come to China to visit my house, and celebrate the traditional festival  with my family together. Then I can be your guide to many places, and show you the culture which is different from yours.    

Hope for you early reply, and best wishes!     

Yours，

Tom

解析:

首先考生應該把寫信的目的陳述清楚；其次要照顧所給重點，也就是得分點，逐一陳述，切忌逐字逐句翻譯，為了是句子之間緊湊，應該適當運用連接詞。另外，作為優(yōu)秀作文的前提是適當使用高級詞匯及句型結構，主要是為了展示自己的寫作功底。