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第II卷（非選擇題共40分）
第三部分：寫作（共二節(jié)，滿分40分）
第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處, 多者 ( 從第11處起 ) 不計分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
　　                                                       Yours sincerely,
　                                                  　        Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into                      an                                             
a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate

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disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I
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same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do
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me the favor.
Best wishes.
　　                                                       Yours sincerely,
　                                                  　        Li Ming

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