Question

書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
今天，你收到了好友小玲的一封信，信中她說(shuō)最近想買一部手機(jī)，為此她征求你的意見，根據(jù)以下提示，請(qǐng)你寫一封建議她不要買手機(jī)的回信。字?jǐn)?shù)：120左右，信的開頭已給出，不講入字?jǐn)?shù)。
提示：
1、發(fā)短信會(huì)占據(jù)太多的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間;
2、校內(nèi)不許用手機(jī)，因?yàn)闀?huì)打擾別人;
3、還經(jīng)常會(huì)收到一些欺騙性的不良短信;
4、因手機(jī)費(fèi)用而增加父母的負(fù)擔(dān)。

Answer 1

Dear Xiao Ling,
I’m very glad to receive your letter today. How are you getting along with your study?
I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not. If you do not mind, I suggest that you should not buy one. Why? First, it takes up too much time to send or receive short messages. Therefore the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter. Second, it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class. Otherwise, your behavior can disturb others. Third, you may be disturbed by some false short messages. Furthermore, as a student, you have to ask parents for the phone expense. That is, they will burden more to support you than before.
You must, of course, use your own judgment, but I would suggest this.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Lei.

解析這題是要點(diǎn)作文，寫作時(shí)，要將要點(diǎn)寫全，還不能逐字逐句翻譯，切記不能用漢語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式，要用英語(yǔ)常用短語(yǔ)和句型，如范文里的 I am pleased that you want my advice on whether you should buy a mobile phone or not.這句話中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，the time that you should spend on studies becomes shorter.這是定語(yǔ)從句，it is forbidden to use mobile phones at school because sometimes you have to respond the call in class.這是it做形式主語(yǔ)的用法，當(dāng)然，寫作時(shí)不能忽略文章的連貫問(wèn)題，可以用First 、Second、Third,連接，還要根據(jù)文章的句子間的邏輯關(guān)系選用適當(dāng)?shù)母痹~，如：Therefore 、Otherwise等。