Question

某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站的論壇正就“如何保持友誼”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)以 “How to keep friendship”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)文章，參與討論。
參考要點(diǎn)如下：
1.與朋友保持聯(lián)系；
2.尊重朋友，誠(chéng)實(shí)待人；
3.朋友有困難時(shí)及時(shí)幫助等。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)：120-150； 
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

How to keep friendship
As we all know, friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend, we can share happiness and worries, which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
Since friendship makes a great difference to us, we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows: Firstly, we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e-mails, writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly, we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition, good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
In a word, if we want to keep friendship, we’d better treat our friends as we want to be treated.

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文的話題是“如何保持友誼”；可以從與朋友保持友誼的方法：電話，短信，經(jīng)常聚會(huì)等多種方式。與朋友相處時(shí)，熱情大方，真誠(chéng)。能為朋友做自己能做的事情�？梢詮倪@幾個(gè)方面著手展開(kāi)。在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，選擇句式時(shí)也要有變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。