Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds the view what Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll be unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it was bad for my eyes. But I really can’t accept his ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Beside, it is important for us to know what has happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t forbidden to watch TV.

Answer 1

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school.

                with

She holds the view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every

                what                             full

minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to her that once I am allowed to

do that, I’ll be unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also

thinks it was bad for my eyes. But I really can’t accept his ideas. In my opinion,

        is                                   her

watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.  Beside, it is

watching                                   work   Besides

important for us to know what has happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we

shouldn’t ∧ forbidden to watch TV.

         be

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