Question

湯姆因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫信給你求助。請根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給湯姆回信。開頭結(jié)尾已給出。所給要點(diǎn)必須寫到外，自己可以適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。
1: 手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：聯(lián)系方便（方便convenient），好玩
2: 帶手機(jī)上學(xué)存在的問題：影響教學(xué)，花大量時(shí)間打手機(jī)有害學(xué)習(xí)和健康
3..詞數(shù)：100左右。
Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that           
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It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones in school.        

Answer 1

Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that you were punished for using cellphones, which puzzled you.
There is no doubt that cellphones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, the cellphone is a way to fun.
However, there are some problems with using cellphones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that often using cellphones does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cellphones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.
As a student, we should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones.

考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。關(guān)于湯姆因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分的情況，要求給湯姆寫回信，同時(shí)要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，也屬于提綱類作文，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要點(diǎn)時(shí)以漢語為依據(jù)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。There is no doubt that cellphones can bring us much convenience.和It has been proved that often using cellphones does harm to health.都用了固定句型。