Question

選做題：短文改錯(cuò)。
     假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。
文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^)，
并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

     First, I'd like to thank you for your reminding, although I don't agree with your view which
students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels. Indeed, reading novels
takes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it'll make us know what hard life is.
Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can't learn from our textbook. Of course, reading
novels has it's shortcomings. Novels that have wrong ideas will make us to do something wrong.
Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels outweighs the advantages. And in my
opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon.
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Answer 1

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                                                                                                                             1. that
should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels. Indeed, reading novels takes up some of
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the time that should∧spent on lessons, but it'll make us know what hard life is. Besides, by reading novels
                          3. be                                                      4. how
we can gain what we can't learn from our textbook. Of course, reading novels has it's shortcomings. 
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Novels that have wrong ideas will make us to do something wrong. Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages
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of reading novels outweighs the advantages. And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of 
                       8. outweigh                       9. But                                               10. like
eyes, which broadens my horizon.