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第三節(jié)　書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）
2008年11月，乒乓球世界冠軍鄧亞萍求學(xué)11年終于獲得劍橋大學(xué)博士學(xué)位。假如你是來(lái)自西安的劉梅，聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，興奮不己，立刻給她寫(xiě)了一封祝賀信并表示了自己的崇敬之情。內(nèi)容包括：
⒈ 表示祝賀；⒉ 介紹自己及愛(ài)好；⒊ 解釋崇敬的原因；⒋ 學(xué)到什么及自己的決心。
參考內(nèi)容：鄧亞萍退出體壇后到清華大學(xué)，英國(guó)的Cambridge University 及 Nottingham University 學(xué)習(xí)，11年后獲得經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)博士學(xué)位。
參考詞匯：博士學(xué)位  doctor’s degree 自信 self-confidence 決心  determination 崇敬  admire  
注意：⒈ 詞數(shù)100左右；⒉ 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Yaping,
First, I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on receiving the degree from Cambridge University.
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Your fan,
Liu Mei

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Dear Yaping,
First, I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on receiving the degree from Cambridge University.
I am Liu Mei, a senior student from Xi’an. I am a keen follower of table tennis and eager to write to you for long. I often watch table tennis games and your excellent skills have made a deep impression on me. After you retire from the sport, you went to Tsinghua University, Cambridge University and Nottingham University to study. After 11 years’ hard work, your dream has come true, which inspires me a lot. I admire you not only for your contributions to sports but also for your strong will and determination as well as your self-confidence. You set me a good example. I am determined to learn from you.
Wish you an even brighter future and a happier life.
Your fan,
Liu Mei

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