Question

IV. 寫(xiě)作（共兩節(jié)，滿(mǎn)分40分）

第一節(jié)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作（共1小題，滿(mǎn)分15分）

以下是一位學(xué)生對(duì)英國(guó)出版社英語(yǔ)教材的反饋意見(jiàn)表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，寄回英國(guó)出版社。

姓名	李華	聯(lián)系電話(huà)	0750--567890
學(xué)校	耀華中學(xué)	電子郵箱	Lihua2009@yahoo.com
教材評(píng)價(jià)	主要優(yōu)點(diǎn)	話(huà)題覆蓋面廣，涉及文化、歷史、地理、科技等
主要缺點(diǎn)	部分句子表達(dá)深?yuàn)W；語(yǔ)法如定語(yǔ)從句在某些課文中出現(xiàn)過(guò)于頻繁, 顯得生硬
建議	語(yǔ)法順序由淺入深，先介紹句子基本成分；再學(xué)習(xí)復(fù)合句；增加與單元話(huà)題相關(guān)的閱讀材料

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1．5個(gè)句子介紹表格中對(duì)教材的評(píng)價(jià)內(nèi)容。

2．將5個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文，使用必要的連接詞。

3．頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入句子數(shù)。

參考詞匯：定語(yǔ)從句:attributive clause       復(fù)合句: compound clause

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear editors:

I am Li Hua from Class Ten Senior One of Yaohua Middle School. My opinions about the textbook are as follows:

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I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.

Please contact me at 0750—567890 or Lihua1995@yahoo.com

Best wishes!

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

First of all, what is good about the textbook is that it covers various subjects such as culture, history, geography and modern science and technology. But there are too many attributive clauses crowded in one passage, which does not seem natural. Besides, some of the sentences are too complicated to understand. If I could make a suggestion, I would like to say that the basic and simple sentence structures should come before the compound clauses in the aspect of grammar starting from easy level. At the same time, there should be more reading materials related to the topic of each unit.

【解析】略